Nowadays people are becoming more self-centered. They are doing things they want to do without caring for the outcomes of the actions. We can observe the negative effects of this behavior in the rising environmental problems and corruption among the officials.
The humans are exploiting nature for making money and other benefits without care. For example, the uncontrolled use of plastics is one of the major problem most of the countries are facing. Even though, all us know they are non biodegradable materials and there are more safer alternatives we continue to use it because of the easiness in doing it. Similarly, we destroy water bodies for benefits for house construction other developmental activities. That has resulted in water scarcity and destruction of ecosystem for many creatures. We can also see this effect in the deforestation activities done by humans for raw materials. So we can say humans are doings things for benefits they don't consider the nature and other creatures.
In addition, we can observe effects of humans running away from their jobs in the rising corruption in the world. Let us consider government official taking money to doing unlawful favor. Though he knows that taking bribe unlawful but he does for his personal gains. The corruption has lead to many problems of society especially it has lead to poverty to wars. Even though, we all know about it we can still see corruption in all tiers of society from a nations president to a clerk in an office.
Furthermore, nowadays people are spending more time on social medias in internet rather studying or doing something productive. For example, people during offices hours spending time in Facebook rather that doing work. This has reduced the productivity of worker in the office. Even people are aware of it people still continue to do it so that they can have fun.
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In short we can say that people became more self-centered and spends time for their personal enjoyment without doing the right job.
- TPO-07 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. 50
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...n biodegradable materials and there are more safer alternatives we continue to use it beca...
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Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ans are doings things for benefits they dont consider the nature and other creatures...
^^^^
Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...rruption in all tiers of society from a nations president to a clerk in an office. ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: L
...ue to do it so that they can have fun. l In short we can say that people became...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'similarly', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247222222222 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.172222222222 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0916666666667 0.0866891130778 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0388888888889 0.046263068375 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.075 0.0685040099705 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152777777778 0.118717715034 129% => OK
Participles: 0.0666666666667 0.0351676179071 190% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.7486780289 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0222222222222 0.0309702414327 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0777777777778 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194444444444 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2003.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 333.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01501501502 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369369369369 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264264264264 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198198198198 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102102102102 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7486780289 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498498498498 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 51.3076575074 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.65 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6313255397 48.84282405 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.15 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.45 0.644075263715 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 43.0764264264 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.63106796117 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197866725367 0.300154397459 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0973622178804 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0717880639148 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.500990328231 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164583418783 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775444927808 0.114077575197 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685966854676 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311480397485 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0830749225963 0.067059652881 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147101110235 0.210909579961 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514760315516 0.0618886996521 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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