I strongly agree with the idea that life today is easier than it was when my grandparents were children. The technology was primitive and outdated in previous decades. However, Humankind seeks to produce modern electronic, communicative, transportive technology which improves our quality of life. Therefore, I will try to give specific reasons.
First of all, companies have updated their product lines. Therefore, new mechanical devices have been launched in recent years. So, people encourage to purchase the modern device for instance; microwave, dishwasher and so forth on. To give an example, I always make foods with microwave during rush hour which helps me to reduce the time of cooking and staying in the kitchen.
Second, communicating with people is getting easier as compared to last decade. The internet interconnects worldwide to links devices globally. Therefore, we can easily access to the variety of website. In addition, many application have been designed to join the group of people together. As for me, I found two of my old friend through facebook and try to call every week. Also, we have arranged a trip to visit each other and make friendship reunion.
Third, the transportation services have been improved the quality of their service. During our trip, public transport covers various destination in the domestic and urban area during our travel to Europe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'purchasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: purchasing
...d in recent years. So, people encourage to purchase the modern device for instance; microwa...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...unicating with people is getting easier as compared to last decade. The internet i...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun application seems to be countable; consider using: 'many applications'.
Suggestion: many applications
...to the variety of website. In addition, many application have been designed to join the group of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, as for, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 221.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3257918552 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8234713998 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678733031674 0.524837075471 129% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9742353923 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5625 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8125 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102835438372 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341259642963 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867862471117 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064630687535 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092129988633 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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