There have been many important changes through the history of human being. What our grandparents underwent is not the same as we experience now. Many people believe that life today is less difficult than it was when our grandparents were children. In my opinion, the life today have more advantages in terms of communication,transportation and jobs.
First of all, life is easier today because the communication have change dramatically. These days there are many technological advances in different field especially in terms of communication; as a result, more and more people can get in touch easily by using cellphones, video phone calls, facebook, twitter, etc. One clear example of the great advances in communication is the e-mail. This program helps us to communicate important messeges fast and without so much effort. On the other hand, When people do not have e-mail , they trust in messegers that take the letters to the destinations; however, it was not a reliable source since it takes longs periods of time to get to the reciever.
In addition to the communication, there have been great improvement in the transportation that make our life easier than it was before. For example,now we have airplanes that we can use to travel to distant places such provinces or even countries. Moreover, the price is affordable for almost anyone since there are a lot of companies that provide this kind of services. Another innovation in transportation is the use of trains that are faster than a car and do not emmit carbon dioxide since they are electrical. In the past our grand parents usually used trains that used carbon as a main source of energy and this material pollute the air , so people tended to suffer respiration problems.
Finally, Another advantages that we have now that makes our life easier is the way we look for employment. Nowadays you can use the internet and send a lot of curriculums at the same time to different companies,so you do not need to move from your house , the only thing you should do is to wait until the companies call you back. In the time when our grand parents were children many people used the newspaper to look for jobs. However, this method was inefficient since it took a great amount of time to get to the place to leave your curriculum.
In conclusion , the life that we live today is more adventageous than it was when our grand parents were kids because there have been many improments in differen fields such as comunnication,transportation and jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , transportation
...ore advantages in terms of communication,transportation and jobs. First of all, life is easi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...her hand, When people do not have e-mail , they trust in messegers that take the l...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , now
...e easier than it was before. For example,now we have airplanes that we can use to t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...n it was before. For example,now we have airplanes that we can use to travel to d...
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... at the same time to different companies,so you do not need to move from your house...
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Suggestion: , transportation
...in differen fields such as comunnication,transportation and jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2092.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92235294118 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16715715153 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487058823529 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9026702613 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.105263158 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3684210526 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78947368421 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193849814246 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636097699699 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577741243995 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123232883438 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430450664405 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.