The vast majority of adults seem to look back at the "old days" with melancholy, those times were supposedly life was easier, things were less expensive and terrible diseases did not exist. But were these times really that great? I think most people of age oversee the great comodities we enjoy in the present day and get stuck in their memories. As a matter of fact, I believe that life today is easier than it previously was, for reasons I will explain in the following essay.
First, now we enjoy an improved quality of life. Science and technology advances have provided us with a better way of living, more comfortable houses, more food and most importantly: better medicine. Many people say that nowadays there are worse diseases than before, but most of said ilnesses come from the extended life lenght. 90 years ago people went to wars to die or simply never lasted infancy, the reason they did not got sick was because people did not lived long enough. With fast access of medicines that cure most of deadly diseases, now people suffer manily from diabetes or high blood preassure, which is caused by the excessively amount of food we eath nowadays.
Second, people all over the world has access to the internet. Scientific innovations have not only improved on medicine but also has brought us the "world wide web" which provides us with both leisure and education. Now we can enjoy top content from all over the world, without geographic distintion, aswell as estaying in touch with our loved ones at the other side of the globe. Additionally, now we have all of the knowledge of mankind at the reach of our phones. This has led to the democratization of education: not only can we learn any skill that we want in the internet, but knowledge is also avaible to poor countries were schools are scarce.
For all the reason stated above, I think that we now we live in a better and fairer world than before. Techonological development has done marvelous things, making our lives better and bringing us together through the internet. I think truly now is a wonderful time to be alive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...lasted infancy, the reason they did not got sick was because people did not lived l...
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Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...not got sick was because people did not lived long enough. With fast access of medici...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...icine but also has brought us the 'world wide web' which provides us with both l...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...icine but also has brought us the 'world wide web' which provides us with both l...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...of the globe. Additionally, now we have all of the knowledge of mankind at the reach of ou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, second, so, well, i think, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80054644809 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55128793797 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592896174863 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5900136486 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.352941176 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132948661582 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431991256253 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481358307091 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832650752695 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488054490661 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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