With development of avant-garde technology, We are confronting new problem that is recently emerged due to technology-Global warming, fuel crisis. To live congenial with modern technology, people should be inured to new environment provided them; thus, the children in today world are able developing their creativity based on modern problem provided to them.
Children,basically, are always ardent to learn the environment around them and easily, can adapt the technology which environs them. For instance: In Pokhara, my Uncle's son, who was 6 years old, can easily operate a computer and gadgets and when ever there is a problem which makes us onerous to repair it , he can easily atone it. And also, basically, he also try to assess the method to prevent from such malfunctioning. Further more, they are also witted- when certain new tools are provided them, they easily it's manual. Further more, as development also creates new problem, today's children tackle with various new problem. Our children see various new stuffs such as Television, mobile, computer along with old problem; so there are various new problem that children should tackle, causing them to make higher imaginative.
The education provided to the children of today's and past's ages were basically similar - the basic alphabet letter, number, moral topic; in additional, quality level may have increased due to numerous research on studying pattern of children. For example, When I was at grade 10, my little brother was at 5 and for certain reason, I have to look after assignment given to him. During period of checking, I saw a numerical problem being solved in unfamiliar way. And, when I further assessed about it, I found a new tactful method, which my new have derived a new simple method. Even tho, it was an facile discovery, but I was amazed by his creativity. Furthermore, his mathematical book contains the facile answer solving pattern (simple formula) and also provide the gist of knowledge, to make them competitive in both expedite and intellectual method. And, today's children are also given intellectual games such as puzzle, chess.
However, children, some believe, unable to solve certain problem related as children needing calculator for solving simple additional, subtraction, multiplication, and division method. I believe that it is because calculator was provided to them since early age.So, making them allowed to used after certain age will check this problem.
Therefore, due to various types of problem provided to children in modern world, children have increase their creativity power rather than degrading it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , basically
... problem provided to them. Children,basically, are always ardent to learn the environ...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...blem which makes us onerous to repair it , he can easily atone it. And also, basic...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
... atone it. And also, basically, he also try to assess the method to prevent from su...
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Line 3, column 753, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...h old problem; so there are various new problem that children should tackle, causing th...
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Line 5, column 596, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d a new simple method. Even tho, it was an facile discovery, but I was amazed by h...
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Line 5, column 700, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more, his mathematical book contains the facile answer solving pattern simple for...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...or was provided to them since early age.So, making them allowed to used after cert...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2214.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33493975904 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86194931327 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3895932819 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0555555556 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0936039362918 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330777028549 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268499575118 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623851574492 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174793021462 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.