TPO 11 do you agree or disagree with the following statement internet provide a lot of valuable information for young people
There are many things brought about modern life, one of these things and the most important on is the internet. In my opinion, the internet provide us with a huge amount of information, this information are considered as priceless material. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
to begin with, internet play a significant role in most of recent researches, which thing help improve all the data that the researcher is needed to. Moreover, access to information through the internet help in analizing and summarizing all the data that the researchers are need. No doubt, the internet also give an access to all the libraries all over the world. As a reslt the work that need done in a years, now could done in few days or weeks. My own experience is a compelling example of this.Two years ago, when I was in university, I had to make a research in biology class about birds, my project included to many kinds of birds, that project talk bout bird's habitat and their immigration, which thing need to many resources. That thing need long time from me to collect all these resources and do analyze and summarized all books. However, by my internet I could do all of that on time and made a brillient project, For this reason, I got a hig grade in biology class. If Had no internet, I would not made all that progress in my biological class.
Furthermore, internet gives a great opportunity to study for people how are working full time jobs or are living in far away places, which thing help a lot of people to fulfill their desire dream. So the internet could help in improving people abilities and enhace their skill. For example, My sister, she is working a full time job as dental assistant. She has big family with two son. Therefore, it is imposible to her to go to college to finish her study as a computer designer. However, thinks for the internet which make help he to fulfill her dream and finished her study by online and get her dgree.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the internet help people by provide them with a lot of beneficial information. this is because internet help people to get the resources that are need to do their researches in short time, and because help people who are have obligations to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in short, no doubt, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5960591133 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59844745766 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6246831991 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2105263158 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190001583012 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677325908215 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538900200061 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137908105444 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425160892102 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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