The Internet affects our lives in many aspects. It has become one of the most important resources for informations. Some people believe that the huge access to information can be harmful, so, it should be limited. However, I utterly believe that this unprecedented access to the information is really beneficial for the following reasons.
Firstly, as we now researches are now considered an essential role of any national development, and the internet made it easier for the researchers to gather any type of information they want. The unlimited access to this knowledge has enriched the research field. Moreover, the wide accessibility of the information helps the students to improve their level in many aspects. For instanse, during the last year I had to do my graduation research which I decided to make it about hypertrophic cardiomyopathy, which a disease affects heart and in decrease its function. At that time I searched in many text books but it was difficult to find the exact information I wanted, but when I looked at the internet I found many puplished paper regarding the same topic from all over the world. That Actually helped me a lot to finish my work in proper way.
Secondly, the huge availability of information in the internet make easier for the people to know the truth. In many countries politics tend to hide some information from the population or even change it in a cosiderable way especially at the election times. And due to the fact that most of the channels at the television and news papers are governed by those leaders, general people are not able to now the reality behind most of the events. Thus, thanks to the internet which helped to show the truth and discover all the manipulations made by those politics. that emphasizes the role of the internet in such field.
In conclusion, in contrary to what some people believe, the accessibility of the information, indeed, make a huge benefits.
Inspite to some littile ignorants disavanteges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98198198198 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95654148186 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2276562607 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5882352941 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157296102742 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506219037365 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338034015793 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923443185358 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031851956111 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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