Internet is a revolution of modern century with fast improving and developing. Some people may addict to it and spend most of their time with it others may see it as wasting of time and doesn't worth this much. In my opinion, I believe that Internet is one of life essential things for many reasons as it's help connecting to create the one world culture in addition to be one of major study resource.
First, Creating the one world culture. Internet simply help connect people from all around the world with easy and simple steps that would help exchange culture experiences. I remember one of my friends that he used to talk to a girl from Australia through the Internet using Skype video calling. They spend a lot of time exchanges culture and social talk and they become so close friend and they got married. so by easy way to connect help build strong relation with other countries.
Second, Internet consider as a huge resource for anything in the universe. Any time people want to search for specific information they would find it one internet although not all of them are true but majority is very helpful. For instance back in my dental study, I asked by my mentor to do a research about using vinegar to reduce calculus build up around teeth and this is a very unique thing to do and no one ever heard about it, so I searched in our college library but I didn't find anything, I tried to find any small source that can lead me to start and at the end I found something helped me a lot in the Internet to start doing the research. So Internet is helpful way to find anything with just simple one button press.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the volubility of using internet in many aspect of life.As it help connecting and offer a lot of information and resources for researchers and eager people to learn. I highly recommend adding internet service to all school and public places and reduce the fees for this service to allow many people to get the benefit of this amazing invention.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Internet is a revolution of modern century with fast improving an...
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Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to connect' or 'connect'.
Suggestion: to connect; connect
...ings for many reasons as it's help connecting to create the one world culture in add...
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Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any reasons as it's help connecting to create the one world culture in addit...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e so close friend and they got married. so by easy way to connect help build stron...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Internet) must be used with a third-person verb: 'considers'.
Suggestion: considers
...th other countries. Second, Internet consider as a huge resource for anything in the ...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ental study, I asked by my mentor to do a research about using vinegar to reduce calculus...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tor to do a research about using vinegar to reduce calculus build up around teeth...
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Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...lus build up around teeth and this is a very unique thing to do and no one ever heard abou...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd this is a very unique thing to do and no one ever heard about it, so I searche...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
...ith the volubility of using internet in many aspect of life.As it help connecting and offer...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...f using internet in many aspect of life.As it help connecting and offer a lot of i...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to connect' or 'connect'.
Suggestion: to connect; connect
...ernet in many aspect of life.As it help connecting and offer a lot of information and reso...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253164556962 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.169620253165 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.073417721519 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0303797468354 0.046263068375 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0759493670886 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124050632911 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0278481012658 0.0351676179071 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47021418524 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0455696202532 0.0309702414327 147% => OK
Particles: 0.00253164556962 0.00188951952338 134% => OK
Determiners: 0.073417721519 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0126582278481 0.0209618222197 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00506329113924 0.0139019557991 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2029.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 362.0 408.028673835 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60497237569 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32320441989 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218232044199 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160220994475 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0718232044199 0.112833075102 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47021418524 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516574585635 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.4441536412 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.8571428571 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.9920174323 48.84282405 190% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.928571429 120.699889404 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.5533526081 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.644075263715 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.680347277 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.46788990826 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308877353879 0.300154397459 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117825094767 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0729201579004 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537315969264 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170459216273 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125987578764 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555650358992 0.0781384742642 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.323019347473 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0367100668697 0.067059652881 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221639798255 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324738837449 0.0618886996521 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.