In a world where you can find plenty of things to learn and get familiar with, why would someone choose to only get fully educated in one lonely subject? It is a matter of choice whether to know everything about one thing or lots of stuff about many topics. for me, i would go for the second.
Having a decent amount of knowledge about many topics gives more possibilities to have better, more exciting discussions. it even helps gaining more new information and learning new things, exchange of knowledge if i may say, which happens to be a very useful way to get new friends as well, friends who are educated and pleasant to accompany.
The possibility of losing a debate is found of course, but that's a good a thing, losing helps improving one's personality and background of information, and who knows, maybe open up a new path in an interesting subject to go through.
both ways, whatever you choose, it's still gets benefit to you but for me, i would rather choose to know a lot about a lot.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, still, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 407.700716846 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57065217391 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57917513484 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0883762048 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111170235137 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505711548139 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375324709995 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617003279045 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206169250083 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 86.8835125448 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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