During academic studies people enroll at courses that present a broad variety of topics, this is important because specialized knowledge are built from many different pieces of small knowledge and, therefore, with broad knowledge it is possible to create new products, technologies and methods.
After graduating, students start their professional lives and the job market requires them specialized knowledge and some very specific skills in order to be able to perform certain tasks required for the job. Although in almost all cases colleges or schools don't teach specialized skills and it forces people to seek specific skills. So, this skills need to be acquired by studding them and taking classes or other courses or simply by exercising them every day, as they say, practice makes perfect.
For example a person who knows how to change car's tire and how to clean a car's engine or how to change some parts of a car engine, can perform this many simple tasks, but it can not know how to build a new car engine that is more economic, because it may not know how the car burns the fuel or if the fuel could be changed for an alternative one. So, a specialize professional like a mechanical engineer or a fuel engineer that have studied most of its life about new fuels could create new improved cars that can spent less fuel and have more power.
In conclusion I think both kinds of knowledge are important because, with broad knowledge you can contribute to a variety of things, but there is no special people that can retain all knowledge in the world so there is some people that specialize specific knowledge so they can act in such areas because they are the best on what they do. And so companies can benefit from both kind of professional.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78032786885 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53138536214 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.1344086022 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.1371903844 48.9658058833 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.25 100.406767564 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.125 20.6045352989 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148710249106 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634495894671 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533356471527 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954385959029 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389806084368 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 11.7677419355 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.0537634409 171% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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