According to an investigation, people in increasing numbers are exposed to abundant information which lead a question that if it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one subject. Some claim that they prefer the first choice since they can be an all-rounders and lead a colorful life. However, this is arbitrary and unilateral. I holds that people should focus on just one things. My reasons and examples are given below.
Initially, focusing on one specific subject means that people can get higher achievement in their own field. As is known to all, there are only 24 hours in a day that it is impossible to generate all the things. In that case, people who concentrate on one subject have more time to explore the unknown world. Take Mo Yan as an example. As the winner of the Nobel Prize for literature, he just focuses on the novel writing for years. Before we knew him, he didn't give up until getting the prize. It is unimaginable if he is an all-rounder and want to try prize.
Besides, individuals who focusing on just one subject can lead the life more relaxing. In order to have a broad knowledge, individuals have to work really hard in different field. However, no one can do well in so many field. For example, one of my friends who want to be a generalist have about 4 classes to take in his weekend. He has to spend all the time learning new subject so that he has no time to review the old one. At last, sadly, he didn't acquire even one of them.
Admittedly, I am not denying that people who have broad knowledge can achieve a greater success in the future career. However, it acquires a great deal of practicing and of course, talents in all the field. In fact, not all the people have the capability to be such a genius. What they can do is to focus on one things and practice it frequently so that they can achieve their goals.
In a nutshell, focusing on one specific subject is a better choice for most of people. It is not only because they have a higher level of opportunity to success in their own field but also because that it is much more easier and relaxing for individual to lead their lives.That is why I feel this way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...er, this is arbitrary and unilateral. I holds that people should focus on just one th...
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Line 1, column 414, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one thing', 'a thing', or simply 'things'?
Suggestion: one thing; a thing; things
... holds that people should focus on just one things. My reasons and examples are given belo...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...iting for years. Before we knew him, he didnt give up until getting the prize. It is ...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...ield. However, no one can do well in so many field. For example, one of my friends who wan...
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Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... review the old one. At last, sadly, he didnt acquire even one of them. Admittedly...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...uire even one of them. Admittedly, I am not denying that people who have broad knowledge ca...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one thing', 'a thing', or simply 'things'?
Suggestion: one thing; a thing; things
...genius. What they can do is to focus on one things and practice it frequently so that they...
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Line 9, column 72, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...specific subject is a better choice for most of people. It is not only because they have a hig...
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Line 9, column 214, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... field but also because that it is much more easier and relaxing for individual to lead the...
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Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
...xing for individual to lead their lives.That is why I feel this way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, really, so, well, as to, for example, i feel, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47394540943 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55801540056 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48635235732 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0843881736 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.125 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7916666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201781351555 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593131224392 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680412983982 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121214951551 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463651951574 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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