In our lives, the family is one of the most important dimenssions of life. It is essential especially to producing new generation. Some people believe that the extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past; other people disagree. I absolutely agree with the idea that the extended family is less important now than it was in the past for two important important reasons that are elaborated in the following paragraphs.
First major reason is that people have to work a lot. When pople work a lot they do not have enough time to spend time with their family such as grandparents, cousins, aunts and uncles and event their parents. For example, tow years ago, when I had to work towlve houres a day and seven days a week in a computer company. I do not have time to spend it with my family. During that time I had never seen my grandparents and even my parents. Because I had to do my project on time. So in that time it was not important for me to meet my extended family.
The second reason is an considerable decrease in the rate of marriage. Blecause of economy problems especially unemployment in most of countries, a lot of people do not get married. And so they do not have a family. Also those who get married just has one or two children. In other words, Children of these children do not have aunts or uncles. For example, in my family, I do not get married. And each of my brothers just have had one child. So in the future we do not have a extended family. Therefor, it is less important for us.
To sum up, I absolutely agree with the idea that the extended family is less important now than it was in the past. Not only do people work a lot, but they also cannot afford to get married. The government should deal with this problem as soon as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: important
...ant now than it was in the past for two important important reasons that are elaborated in the foll...
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Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...en my grandparents and even my parents. Because I had to do my project on time. So in t...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...extended family. The second reason is an considerable decrease in the rate of ma...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...omy problems especially unemployment in most of countries, a lot of people do not get married. An...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ried. And so they do not have a family. Also those who get married just has one or t...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... child. So in the future we do not have a extended family. Therefor, it is less i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'such as', 'in other words', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216931216931 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.161375661376 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0634920634921 0.0866891130778 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0925925925926 0.046263068375 200% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0793650793651 0.0685040099705 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0238095238095 0.0351676179071 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55445233029 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238095238095 0.0309702414327 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0026455026455 0.00188951952338 140% => OK
Determiners: 0.0846560846561 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00529100529101 0.0209618222197 25% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.010582010582 0.0139019557991 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1821.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 338.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3875739645 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.275147928994 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.195266272189 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156804733728 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0917159763314 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55445233029 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431952662722 0.524397521467 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.23966207 59.2087087015 73% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6956521739 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7852043301 48.84282405 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1739130435 120.699889404 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6956521739 20.5533526081 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.434782608696 0.644075263715 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 34.2222793928 45.7405998639 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.05555555556 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447257698858 0.300154397459 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125362237423 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.1138780999 0.0752933317313 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474045604767 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157414035231 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149396972429 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131828474267 0.0781384742642 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.233428846302 0.336927656856 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.037288906737 0.067059652881 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322167833624 0.210909579961 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136047261707 0.0618886996521 220% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.91756272401 305% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 11.0 2.75985663082 399% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.