TPO 14- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this century, technology advancement facilitates the communication between different nations from far distances. In this regard, today, people are more fascinated to travel to foreign countries because they know more about other countries' culture and beauties. When it comes to the merits of moving, controversy surrounds the issue of whether people should select domestic or abroad trip? I am of the opinion that people should learn more about other cultures and countries to enhance their knowledge and perception about the world they live, and the following explanation will further elaborate on this matter.
One of the remarkable aspects of the ongoing discussion which demand a keen contemplation is that traveling can expand our outlook, and also amplify our experience. Thus, It can be a superb lesson in our life. In essence, people require experiencing new perspectives to improve the society's problem. Take my professor's experience for instance. A couple of years ago, my teacher, Mr. Jake, traveled to industrialized countries to get a better notion about their advances in technology. Based on those trips experiences, he made a high-tech invention related to the power grid's energy consumption. Therefore, traveling to other countries can benefit both the society and the people.
Another noticeable aspect of the topic is that by going to other countries and seeing unusual life conditions, we can appreciate our excellences and also raise our understanding about the countries which require our help. To illustrate, perhaps my father’s experience can shed more light on this matter. He was volunteered to visit impoverished countries to gather some crucial data about how many people were experiencing the obesity. Although he was traveling between African forests, one of the most intact places in the world, he had to experience the most heart-breaking situations.
Paradoxically, there are some believing that if people travel in their country, they foster the domestic economy. As a matter of fact, people buy things, spend their money on the handmade stuff, and also pay for the hotel and the amusement facilities in the city they travel. Hence, they unintentionally help the economy of the whole country.
By the points mentioned above, I am pretty convinced that there are enough reasons to support the idea of traveling to foreign countries because it can improve our knowledge about new advances in some countries, and also we can appreciate our nations privileges and help other countries who are needy. Meanwhile, traveling in our country can bolster the domestic economy of the city we visit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ries because they know more about other countries culture and beauties. When it comes to ...
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Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'grids'' or 'grid's'?
Suggestion: grids'; grid's
...igh-tech invention related to the power grids energy consumption. Therefore, travelin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34457831325 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95063168134 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539759036145 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.745343954 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198551493343 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607907528146 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511275529702 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116602414113 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330478982174 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.