There is no shortage of opinions on why individuals should travel to their own nation or abroad. People mostly opt to visit for a variety of reasons, such as refreshment, learning about nature, lifestyle, and culture, etc. I agree that traveling inside one’s nation has more advantages for people than traveling abroad, as it offers job opportunities and the chance to discover their historical background.
To begin with, the best approach to understanding our history and culture is to look within our own nation. Every region of a nation has its own history and culture, which may be quite distinct from others. Local travel broadens our perspectives and enables us to get a fuller image of the rest of the nation. For instance, I didn’t have much time to properly understand my culture due to my busy schedule and city life. I got a chance to visit Manakamana Temple (one of the famous religious sites in Nepal) a year ago. I enjoyed different aspects of that place by participating in activities that are run there. As a result, I get a chance to identify the cultures that were held and practiced by my ancestors. If I hadn’t gone there, I never would have learned about those cultures.
Moreover, domestic tourism offers job opportunities at the local level. It will help to protect and promote local skills and be effective in reducing the brain drain across the nation. For example, there is an art gallery nearby my house. Local people in my community are very skilled in art craving and designing in different metals. So, they create such arts and sell them in art galleries, which has instilled a strong mentality in them. Similarly, visitors from all over my country come here to learn more about it. Some visitors even purchase those crafts, which have helped improve the economic status of local people. It's easy to see how domestic travel benefits people's economies.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that domestic travel has more benefits than international travel. This is due to the fact that it provides employment opportunities and leads us down the path to discover our identity.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign country 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should make it possible for children to attend preschool early childhood education programs for example for three year old children at no costs for children s families Use reasons and 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should make it possible for children to attend preschool early childhood education programs for example for three year old children at no costs for children s families Use reasons and 74
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.918767507 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71642545879 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0594123211 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.619047619 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215839914165 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571336200912 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803252332996 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136383186894 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562281439114 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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