With a development of human civilization, people have realized that jaunty, expedition provide them recreation or refreshment from their monotonous job. And today's main issue is whether we should plan our traveling inside or outside a country. Since every aspect have pros and cons, but traveling, I suppose, inside the country will be beneficial because of various reasons I will be providing below.
At first, expedition inside our own country aids our government to collect the revenue and further abet going one country money outside of the country. For instance, during 2003, in Nepal, there was a special skim for visiting Thailand, Dubai, China, so myriad of Nepalese went out for an expedition, leading to waste 20 million rupees out of the country. So, soon after realization, the government banned such skim.
Second, venturing inside country also helps in a development of the country. After banned in foreign countries, numerous people started traveling inside our country and this leads to upliftment of local market, transportation facilities, sale of local products; thus, it aided our country not only in the development of local areas but also raised living standard of the people. For example- Nepal, being a mountainous country, lacks transportation as well as other facilities. but when, due to banned in other countries, people started exploring their own country, activity in such rural areas such as in mountain sites began to increase, pressuring the government for providing development plans in those areas.
Third, focusing in local areas also aids in help to interact with various people of our own countries. As we know that within the country, there are various culture and tradition, which may be unknown to own country people. For example, in Far-western development region of Nepal, there are living tribe of human being which norms and values are different from major Nepalese. However, they ,at first, attracted the domestic people, leading to increase in visitor, but after a period, they were also attracted by foreigners.
Finally, I believe that people should primarily focus for an expedition to their own countries places as it will render many advantage to the country and it's own people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...sportation as well as other facilities. but when, due to banned in other countries,...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tribes'?
Suggestion: tribes
...pment region of Nepal, there are living tribe of human being which norms and values a...
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Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...erent from major Nepalese. However, they ,at first, attracted the domestic people,...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
... own countries places as it will render many advantage to the country and its own people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, thus, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28291316527 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73618859448 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540616246499 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2305660779 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.733333333 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147208695793 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522413090108 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038607010237 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899588370395 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321101760981 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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