Ability of properly managing financial matters is among the most important features that highly affects anyone during his life. Some people believe that it is better for the children to start handling their own money at an early age. I am totally in favor of this opinion due to the importance of financial matters and their effects on forming the child’s personality.
First and foremost, handling financial matters would make the child appreciate value of the money. In fact, if a child has no worries about how the daily things are bought and provided, he will never learn how to gain and spend his own money. Indeed, the unlimited access to a financial support might result to raising a spoiled or naïve child. It goes without saying that lacking the ability of handling money would make it difficult for a person to achieve his independent personality. For instance, I can mention one of my friend’s experience. He grew up in an affluent family with no restriction on spending money. As a consequence, he experienced lots of hardship during his early 20s as he lacked the ability of economical thinking. As a matter of fact he went through hard times adapting to complex situation in the real life.
Furthermore, childhood is the best time for developing various important characteristics, as well as ability to manage financial matters. Without doubt, learning to be disciplined is a feature that remains with a person during his life. Certainly, a little pressure in the early ages would facilitate the rest of his life and result in earning some precious lessons. Moreover, it is noteworthy that in the childhood the consequences of making mistakes is limited. Hence, it is proper to learn these important lessons during early life rather than being a grown up and yet not be able to decide well on solving financial problems.
On the whole, according to above mentioned reasons and examples, it is crystal clear that learning the management of financial matters in childhood will make a person responsible later in his life, and also the side effects of making wrong decisions in early ages is limited, as compared to serious situations an adult may encounter.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228873239437 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.146126760563 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0669014084507 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0651408450704 0.046263068375 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0387323943662 0.0685040099705 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0933098591549 0.118717715034 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0475352112676 0.0351676179071 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.48399552986 2.67179642975 130% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0105633802817 0.0309702414327 34% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.12323943662 0.0887237588012 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0228873239437 0.0209618222197 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176056338028 0.0139019557991 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2844.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 455.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25054945055 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32967032967 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274725274725 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197802197802 0.174417080927 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151648351648 0.112833075102 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48399552986 2.67179642975 130% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50989010989 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 58.6189360399 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 16.25 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5230619001 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 0.644075263715 39% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.5376344086 154% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.54480286738 649% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.7225274725 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.47887323944 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153000583574 0.300154397459 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115983256454 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108339483769 0.0752933317313 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.500153467284 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.200904013976 0.151897553556 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600471817807 0.114077575197 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348184721859 0.0781384742642 45% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335690294305 0.336927656856 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.131714674087 0.067059652881 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103066373761 0.210909579961 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205386065764 0.0618886996521 33% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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