Some people may thinks that having a trip with a tour is so interesting and easy but i can express some reasons and example to clear why i think tripe lonely is better.
First, having trip with a grope cause people be in the rule of tour guide and loose their freedom in term of places visiting, time setting, hotel siting and so on. A person who travel lonely can visit places which are favorable for him instead people in a tour should visit only places which tour guide have been selecting.
Second, sometimes people like to stay more at hotel and go to visiting latter but in a tour all people should be prepare at a definite time. For an example last year i went to vocation with a tour. I didn't enjoy because i was enforced to wake at 8 o'clock every morning then eat a bad breakfast in a hotel after that we should go visiting museum, historical building. I wanted to visited natural scene park, zoo and natural museum.
Finally, some people think that programing for a travel are so hard and stressful especially finding good hotel. I think by searching deeply about that place which person want to travel he or she can have a safe and enjoyable tripe. Actually by good programing and using our wisdom and be careful, we can have a good travel even better than with a tour. On the other hand having a good travel can be plus to freedom in program setting and money saving by traveling alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...h a tour is so interesting and easy but i can express some reasons and example to...
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...people be in the rule of tour guide and loose their freedom in term of places visitin...
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...tter but in a tour all people should be prepare at a definite time. For an example last...
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...definite time. For an example last year i went to vocation with a tour. I didnt e...
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...tter than with a tour. On the other hand having a good travel can be plus to free...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, may, second, so, then, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42084942085 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25721827953 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563706563707 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4929194417 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.090909091 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103818778308 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470552091727 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359389729265 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686560934006 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157427149887 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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