Moving around the Earth is known as the first approach that humans have been employed to survive or even recreation. However, people today travel and see other spots as an enjoyment. The question immediately comes to mind is whether group tours are the best way to travel. In my opinion, some factors are involved in the travel that can change the answer.
First, traveling by tours is potential to provide some advantages that lead to a far more comfortable journey. Based on the type of travel, people sometimes conceive that if they benefit from the experiences of a tour leader, they will have a more fascinating journey. For instance, a long sea voyage is not possible without group led by tour guide because it needs a reliable ship or vessel, a secure plan and a broad range of knowledge about sailing. Does it possible for a family or a group of friends on their own? Furthermore, traveling by tour is more cost effective because the expenses of the journey will be split between more people.
Second, a large number of trips do not require any guide, which is the case for traveling on tours. People sometimes prefer to travel to a familiar location like their hometown or historical city in their own country. Obviously, they can manage all aspect of such travels because it is not as complicated as travel abroad with unforeseen problems or dangers which may happen. For instance, every year more than two million people in my country go a trek in the northernmost coastal city without any tour.
In conclusion, according to two different situations provided earlier, it is my deep conviction that people can benefit from advantages of either traveling independently or traveling by groups led by tour guide based on the location they intend to go and also its conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...e split between more people. Second, a large number of trips do not require any guide, which i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85947712418 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66734940959 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9773247605 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172581884052 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630434502794 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453441399094 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110536216866 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155200822108 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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