Yes, I agree this statement which state that in order to be well informed, a person must get more information from many different news resources like news paper, TV channels, social media like face book, twitter, google search and whats up why because these basic fundamental platform for those who are seeking for general knowledge and be well informed. Here i like to explore few points regarding how these resources help one who want to be well informed.
Firstly, after all be well informed nothing but how much information one person having on current situation. Without news resources person can't be learned learn so many information even that different between the educated people and non educated people. For everyone parents are first news resources for us, initially they give us all information regarding the life, culture and so on. If the parents are giving more information to the child that child become be well informed in future, if not the child become poor knowledge about his living world even so many articles and research papers are proved this.
Secondly, next when you come to news paper, it amazing and wonderful media for those are seeking for general knowledge, every day by reading the national, international, regional, scientific articles, sports and politics people can get more and more information and their knowledge also blooms rapidly.For example one my friend his name is Rama he use to read every new paper daily, and one day won the quiz competition state level it all happens because of reading habit.
Thirdly, when comes to social media, now a days social media are having great impact on the getting the more information, medias like whats up, twitter and face book gives platform to share knowledge with each other no matter where you and which nationality you are. early only college level educated people only used to share more information. After the arrival of face book everyone of us gaining for more information regardless of our education level, it is revolution
Finally, i want to conclude that to be well informed a person mus have get more information from many different news resources, these resources not limited to only formal education, information can be gained like face book, twitter and whatsup.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'after all', 'even so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271844660194 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.162621359223 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106796116505 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0631067961165 0.046263068375 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0412621359223 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0825242718447 0.118717715034 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0606796116505 0.0351676179071 173% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55022578521 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0291262135922 0.0309702414327 94% => OK
Particles: 0.00242718446602 0.00188951952338 128% => OK
Determiners: 0.0703883495146 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00728155339806 0.0209618222197 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0266990291262 0.0139019557991 192% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2302.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 375.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13866666667 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258666666667 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181333333333 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130666666667 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55022578521 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.2438578543 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6684587814 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 37.5 20.5533526081 182% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 132.375224268 48.84282405 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.2 120.699889404 191% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.5 20.5533526081 182% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.6 0.644075263715 248% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.54480286738 523% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 63.3666666667 45.7405998639 139% => OK
Elegance: 1.55454545455 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339962036434 0.300154397459 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147563538367 0.103427244359 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0506002418462 0.0752933317313 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.648889435532 0.497263757937 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216607127848 0.151897553556 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156925500206 0.114077575197 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671205450527 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.253052095267 0.336927656856 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0271082603469 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225696502166 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811139788386 0.0618886996521 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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