Nowadays, there are variety of resource which we can use them to increase our knowledege about different subject. Many people think that get the information from various sources can help us to have more information. I believe that become an expert in new subject, we should emerge ourself in diverse sources because it has widen our thought and enhance our knowledge.
First, learning new idea needs plenty of practice from credible sources. we can learn it from the Internet, books, and teachers.
During our studying in the university, we always get new information and our university`s professor encourage us to research about the subject. In my experience, while I was in botany class, the lecturer gives us the list of books and websites that we can find valuable information. By studying the books, I understood the function of plants in the environment.
Second, getting the information from different sources enhance our knowledge which is essential in this competitve world. Also, it increases our chance to develop a career and build a bright future. As for me, I have learned some skills for my job by asking from my supervisor and the books.
In conclusion, informotion cames from different source and for being mindful, we must study various subjects.
- TPO-14 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support you 60
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 60
- TPO-10 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...rself in diverse sources because it has widen our thought and enhance our knowledge. ...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...enty of practice from credible sources. we can learn it from the Internet, books, ...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pos;s professor encourage us to research about the subject. In my experience, whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, while, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87432459265 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610576923077 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0262616536 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10013902442 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414979763907 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410855006125 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639649697006 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279627088161 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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