TPO-19 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I disagree with this idea that getting information from different news resources make a person better informed about a issue.
First of all, different news resources analyses issue different according to their political and social orientation. For example, last year I wanted to write a paper about the health in Asian social. I went to different resources to earn information. each resources expressed and analyses women health in Asian countries according to themselves interests. Websites which were relate with that countries reported they have a hight level of women health. this was common because they wanted to show their government manage good. Instead international news resources especially those which had impartially orientation reported different.
Second, use of the most trust able resource is better than use different resources. Using different resources make the person amuse and cause they cant be able to recognize the most correct information.
Third, most reporter resources report information and news only for get more profits from organization which relevant to them. For example, some persons who have responsibilities in countries may be bad and try to hide true information from society. When i study in hight school i wrote a paper about human wright in Arabic countries. all inter countries told women have very good and acceptable condition. On the other side by getting information from foreign resources such Asian women rights I knew women in Arabic countries don't have at all good right or life condition. at that point i understood for writing a good better paper or getting information for everything select a few trust able resources is more important than getting from different resources.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ces make a person better informed about a issue. First of all, different news r...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Each
...ifferent resources to earn information. each resources expressed and analyses women ...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: all
...ifferent resources to earn information. each resources expressed and analyses women ...
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Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
...emselves interests. Websites which were relate with that countries reported they have ...
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Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...hey have a hight level of women health. this was common because they wanted to show ...
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Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...d to show their government manage good. Instead international news resources especially...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...es make the person amuse and cause they cant be able to recognize the most correct i...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to hide true information from society. When i study in hight school i wrote a paper...
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Line 4, column 255, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ide true information from society. When i study in hight school i wrote a paper a...
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Line 4, column 279, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...m society. When i study in hight school i wrote a paper about human wright in Ara...
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Line 4, column 335, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...about human wright in Arabic countries. all inter countries told women have very go...
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Line 4, column 528, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...rights I knew women in Arabic countries dont have at all good right or life conditio...
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Line 4, column 575, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...ve at all good right or life condition. at that point i understood for writing a g...
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Line 4, column 589, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... right or life condition. at that point i understood for writing a good better pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, third, for example, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 272.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38602941176 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84386585281 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1622392965 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177200353811 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646885087343 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632967522443 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14187165669 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653003099497 0.0645574589148 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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