There is no shortage of debate about the importance of Information medium, and being a well-informed person, it is always necessary to collect the information from the several news resources. Yes, I strongly agree with the statement, I feel this way because of the two reasons which I will explain in the essay.
First of all, in modern days there are several sources of a news or information, and, it is essential to get the information from the several sources. These days, we cannot trust on a single source of the information, because these days several fake news is floating by several news portals. In our electoral system, few political parties are also using fake news for their political benefits. Some time, radical groups are also involved in hate-spreading fake news, which is very dangerous for the society. Therefore, as a responsible citizen, it is our important duty to check all news sources and verify that particular news. In this way we are well-informed about that particular news. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year I heard, I fake news related to the our college, according to that my college is facing lots of problems and soon they are going to shut that college. After that, I inquired about this news from my several sources and in last I knew that it was a fake news. Therefore, I strongly suggest that we should depend on several news sources.
Secondly, information from different sources educates us on different aspects of life. Reading different books related to medical science and watching the medical news in tv taught me a lot about the neurological disease. For instance, I read a few different articles related to Parkinson disease and I also watched a scientific program about the Parkinson. In this way, I gathered all information related to the disease, and last year my friend diagnosed with Parkinson, and now I am taking care of him. I know how to behave with them and what kind of medication is required in that stage. Therefore, I strongly believe that information from different source educate us.
In conclusion, the essay argued the importance of the several news medium. It is necessary to get information from all the sources. These informations teach us about our surroundings and educate us. Therefore, I strongly recommend that we should be received news from the different sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 786, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...st year I heard, I fake news related to the our college, according to that my college i...
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Line 2, column 999, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'fake news'.
Suggestion: fake news
... sources and in last I knew that it was a fake news. Therefore, I strongly suggest that we ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation from different source educate us. In conclusion, the essay argued the impo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some news'.
Suggestion: some news
... the essay argued the importance of the several news medium. It is necessary to get informat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1970.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9373433584 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85061250802 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468671679198 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8737235386 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5454545455 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1363636364 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196978315982 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683932227108 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468132489659 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147999794705 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495239585855 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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