As we all know life is quite unpredictable, everyone in his/her life has to take risks willingly or unwillingly. But is it is wise to take risks in life willfully in order to achieve success or is it better to avoid it and continue doing the same thing that one knows very well? Well some people think that it is better to avoid taking risks in life as much as possible because there is no guaranty of success. However, in my opinion, it is wise to take calculative risks some times in life to grow
and to reach t great heights. I believe this way for the following reasons.
To begin with, there is no rule to attain success. Although, this point seems to be a bit complex initially so I will elaborate this point. We all will have to concur that in schools whatever we learn is of no use later in life as we need practical knowledge to achieve desired results and that knowledge we don’t from anywhere except from “Experience”. Now, this experience is gained over a period of time by experimenting and by trying new different thing for example when I was in college I took biology as my major thinking that it is a demanding field, so, I will get success in it. However, later I realized that I am not interested in it, In fact I was inclined towards Math and so I took risks and changed my major subject to math. This incidence taught me that it is not always necessary to follow the rule book designed by the society but it essential to find out one’s own interest to get success.
Moreover, if one will continue doing the same thing that one thinks one knows or likes but indeed one doesn’t then there might be a chance that we will fail in that particular thing as well. As I have mentioned before that sometimes we feel that we like something or we are compelled to believe that one will definitely be successful in a particular field or thing because it is more demanding and it is safe option to choose. So, one will end up doing it but if one is not interested in it or does not enough knowledge of it then it will not be a discern thing to pursue it anyway. I have told this by giving example of myself before as well, I had taken science just because my parents and friends told me to do so. Though, it is true that it is a great field and many of my friend are doing very well in it but I was not able to comprehend it and if I would have continued with it then it was in evident to fail in it. That is why, I rather took risks and today I feel that my decision was correct.
To recapitulate, I must say that to achieve one’s goal in life is important
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Discourse Markers used:
['anyway', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in fact', 'in my opinion', 'it is true', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.154545454545 0.229887763892 67% => OK
Verbs: 0.194545454545 0.158761421928 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0690909090909 0.0866891130778 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0781818181818 0.046263068375 169% => OK
Pronouns: 0.107272727273 0.0685040099705 157% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118181818182 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0309090909091 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61361835743 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0454545454545 0.0309702414327 147% => OK
Particles: 0.00363636363636 0.00188951952338 192% => OK
Determiners: 0.0527272727273 0.0887237588012 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00727272727273 0.0139019557991 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2616.0 2387.08602151 110% => OK
No of words: 495.0 408.028673835 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28484848485 5.86048508987 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.244444444444 0.338922669872 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.189898989899 0.251872472559 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127272727273 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0828282828283 0.112833075102 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61361835743 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440404040404 0.524397521467 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.9815176756 59.2087087015 84% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.5 20.5533526081 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4103195685 48.84282405 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 120.699889404 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.5533526081 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.644075263715 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 46.4898989899 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 0.799043062201 1.45489161554 55% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174619932102 0.300154397459 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133203060323 0.103427244359 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102881670139 0.0752933317313 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.567649708053 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180390458531 0.151897553556 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087543125813 0.114077575197 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365161481593 0.0781384742642 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.259972865327 0.336927656856 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.17134761838 0.067059652881 256% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13263429049 0.210909579961 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330313136783 0.0618886996521 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.