Almost every day of the week we can read a lot of stories about the key secrets of successful people. In fact, this issue has arisen much controversy among people. Some people are of the belief that successful people are risky enough to try new things rather than doing the same things. I personally go along with this idea for the following reasons.
To put my first reason forward, I can say that they have high creativity leads into being standout. In other words, since they do their work with different methods creatively, it is more probable to be succeed rather than someone who does it by the constant way. In fact, either by using their own combined methods or modifying some parts they open the new door to better results.
Another fact should not be ignored is that someone who tries new things in his work, his methods will be up-to-date. To be illustrate more this issue, I give a contrast example. Imagine an engineer while who has the steady way in his work in the long run, when he faces with new methods, he will be compelled to apply these. If he does not adapt to new circumstances, he will be out of date. Consequently, the successful person in order to avoid being old and applying expired methods, not only will be more likely not to be on the bias towards his old attitudes, but also will appeal to a diversity of new procedures.
The last but not the least, even though you do your work well, utilizing steady manners with the similar methods, will make your mind be lazy gradually. That is, you work autonomously without thinking more. Almost like running without exercising. If we do not exercise, our body will be inactive. As a result, if an unproductive situation force us to run, In spite of walking well, we will be tired very soon and we cannot continue. Likewise, this situation by using new ways and doing differently, our mind will practice how to think creatively and how to be bright.
To put all in a nutshell, as a 20 first century citizen who face with lots of ongoing changes increasingly, it is crucial to us to be accurate the mentioned features that make someone be succeed. It suffices to say that successful people in addition to being creative and up-to-date avoid being lazy. Hopefully, we can learn from them and may be one as well.
- TPO-09 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-08 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 185, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...he mentioned features that make someone be succeed. It suffices to say that succes...
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Line 9, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...learn from them and may be one as well.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'likewise', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'as a result', 'in other words', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.170305676856 0.229887763892 74% => OK
Verbs: 0.176855895197 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0982532751092 0.0866891130778 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0764192139738 0.046263068375 165% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0764192139738 0.0685040099705 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109170305677 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0502183406114 0.0351676179071 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5400258094 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0393013100437 0.0309702414327 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0742358078603 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0327510917031 0.0209618222197 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0196506550218 0.0139019557991 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2296.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 410.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.282926829268 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217073170732 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143902439024 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0926829268293 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5400258094 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 63.2782929225 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5238095238 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4562267803 48.84282405 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 120.699889404 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5238095238 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.761904761905 0.644075263715 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.231126597 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.0 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279538924445 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106383737781 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735652336582 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496123958574 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164495758917 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940535933557 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597271165866 0.0781384742642 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.264234081705 0.336927656856 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0877519943339 0.067059652881 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177120806524 0.210909579961 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253381819806 0.0618886996521 41% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.