A famous quote states that "Success is not the key to happiness. Happiness is the key to success. If you love what you are doing, you will be successful." And Yes, I believe that Successful people are the ones those who take risks, discover their path of success. People succeed when their desire to succeed becomes greater than the fear of failure.
One of the best living example I can ever give is the life of a famous Business magnet of the world Dhirubhai Ambani from India who was born to a normal middle class family. His autobiography tells how he followed up his dreams of doing what he likes, and found the Reliance Industry. He took the path which was unprecedented, met failures and became a Successful entrepreneur, as well as, third richest in the world.
There are many more ideals from the history who took the unusual path. Especially the scientists then and now who invented and discovered different laws and theories, places, planets have all followed the path no one else followed and have credited to the goodness of society and self-satisfaction.
One more example, perhaps, I can give is Myself. From my experience, I would say that one will never know his strength until he tries.I realized this when my teacher encouraged me to participate in Science Talent exam held nationwide and I banged third place in my state. It provoked and encouraged me to look life in a new inclination and then after, I never stopped and became more successful as a Scientist.
Anybody can attain success, but, success with self-satisfaction comes only when we chase our dreams and take risk doing that rather doing a usual thing everyone does. I conclude with the fact that, in order to be Successful one should take risk which is accompanied with trying new things and working hard towards it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'greater than'?
Suggestion: greater than
...ed when their desire to succeed becomes greater then the fear of failure. One of the best...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ces, planets have all followed the path no on else followed and have credited to t...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... never know his strength until he tries.I realized this when my teacher encourage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, third, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83653846154 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82196750075 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1045856158 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.785714286 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216164487004 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065014606923 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071680979523 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110015949869 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932883307364 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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