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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...s should be allowed to talk about their believes in the classrooms or not is a controver...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'speakers'' or 'speaker's'?
Suggestion: speakers'; speaker's
... areas. In this situation, based on the speakers opinion, some students may have another...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...sense of dissatisfaction among them. Finally yet importantly, discussing social prob...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 362, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...mong which the issue of distracting the students attention from their study and subseque...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 584, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Wouldn't
...students are the most significant ones. Wouldnt be school more efficient for students i...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'frankly', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'talking about', 'in regard to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249287749288 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.143874643875 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0826210826211 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.046263068375 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498575498575 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136752136752 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0413105413105 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96533283524 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0213675213675 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108262108262 0.0887237588012 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.022792022792 0.0209618222197 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.011396011396 0.0139019557991 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4087.0 2387.08602151 171% => OK
No of words: 642.0 408.028673835 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.36604361371 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03365860172 4.48200974243 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389408099688 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314641744548 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241433021807 0.174417080927 138% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160436137072 0.112833075102 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96533283524 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448598130841 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.3018837726 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 30.5714285714 20.5533526081 149% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8748066902 48.84282405 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.619047619 120.699889404 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 20.5533526081 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.644075263715 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 62.0356030263 45.7405998639 136% => OK
Elegance: 1.71428571429 1.45489161554 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363186874341 0.300154397459 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13466566868 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0682046980057 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.581750060916 0.497263757937 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127449407221 0.151897553556 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170970944449 0.114077575197 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627766970518 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.500928081331 0.336927656856 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0657195709164 0.067059652881 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283133552386 0.210909579961 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459225706128 0.0618886996521 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.86379928315 362% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.4623655914 447% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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