There are certain considerations and factors that everyone can take into account to examine or investigate people’s opinion. I defiantly believe that working quickly and risk making mistakes is less important than working slowly and make sure that everything is correct. To substantiate my case, the following paragraphs represent my conspicuous reasons to elaborate my preference.
To begin with, nowadays technology advancement reduces human time and effort when tackle their job. Computer application such as email enable people to have a conversation with another people without having to meet face to face ,while a decades ago, we communicate by mail that takes up at least weeks to reach other region. This advancement facilitates and shortens time needed. As a result, today’s world offers have many technology and application such as email and internet to help us work faster so that we can focus on detail and accuracy in our work.
Furthermore, although working slowly is not ideal employee, mistakes in work sphere is considered unacceptable in many jobs. In fact, mistakes in professional service such as health care can cause patient’s life. Therefore, work quickly and risk making mistakes can be without doubt dangerous than work slowly. To illustrate, research from Bhunaha hospital claims that one of the main reason in surgery’s error is doctors taking less time than they should in perform surgery because most of the hospital have too many cases to handle.
Finally, one of the most important consideration in any relationship is impression. By far, when we think of someone, our brains process that we will likely to think of his or her mistakes first. A Psychology’s article in Bangkok newspaper claims that even people have many good characteristics such as fast working and hardworking, only one mistake is enough to make bad impression. As a result, working slowly while make sure everything correct is more important than working quickly but risk making mistakes.
Due to aforementioned ground, all people should bear in mind that we can take advantages of technology to help us work quickly while spend time focus on detail and quality of our work because mistakes can be dangerous and cause bad impression.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ople without having to meet face to face ,while a decades ago, we communicate by m...
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Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decade' or simply 'decades'?
Suggestion: a decade; decades
...hout having to meet face to face ,while a decades ago, we communicate by mail that takes ...
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Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun technology seems to be countable; consider using: 'many technologies'.
Suggestion: many technologies
... result, today's world offers have many technology and application such as email and inter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, at least, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28888888889 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00573525854 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552777777778 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1520625181 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339492539024 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123914819323 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148042340896 0.0737576698707 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201549076182 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890085390074 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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