In today's world people tend to be more busy on theirs daily stuff and less concerned on the social activities but different people have diverse situation. Personally speaking, Young people themselves do not have enough time to focus on helping communities as it is not compulsory.
First of all, young people have certain routine about their life and career. They had little time to think beyond their work and student life and in those time they prefer to enjoy and take rest. For example, few time ago i tried to approach this job of helping communities but the salary over there is so little which is not enough to sustain life in these expensive world. So, i had to travel to next city in order to take jobs and in doing so i was not able to help my community. Helping is a good things but we are so busy in balancing our life with the changing world that we could not get extra time to help.
Secondly, the member of the society contains lots of different people like young, adult and old. There is a correct division of work of community to different people. So, in these case young people also had enough contributions to these works. It might be less but there is equal division of task as far as those young people are in their community. For example, there will be weekly task of many people in society to help community like in weekdays and in holidays. There is no specific blame to young people as they are doing their job at their own level.
Finally, the lack of the communication between the people may have caused chances of not helping communities. For example, I barely knows the people of my community. I did not even know the names of many people of my community. As there is a high trend of social media so there must be certain group of community in Facebook so the task can be discussed over there and also it helps people to know about each other.
In conclusion, young people are not responsible for not helping the community as the time is limited in every persons life. Lack of understanding and communication might also be the other cause.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd take rest. For example, few time ago i tried to approach this job of helping c...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tain life in these expensive world. So, i had to travel to next city in order to ...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y in order to take jobs and in doing so i was not able to help my community. Help...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...to help my community. Helping is a good things but we are so busy in balancing our lif...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...ping communities. For example, I barely knows the people of my community. I did not e...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...As there is a high trend of social media so there must be certain group of commun...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...mmunity as the time is limited in every persons life. Lack of understanding and communi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5198938992 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43975601872 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450928381963 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3692208001 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6842105263 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226692841189 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805831919925 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545748842057 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138835994682 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435137696753 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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