Job is the routine that will accompany us the entire life. So a job that fits us can not only warrant a successful career, but also be the basement of our happiness. While some people choose the jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs, I would rather choose the similar jobs.
First of all, it is easier for the parents to cultivate the children’s interest in their working fields. Since interest is the most important aspect when choosing a job, children should choose the jobs according to their interest, which tends to be in their parents’ working fields. Many children of NBA stars start playing basketball at a young age and finally enter NBA league years later. One of my classmates whose father works as a chemist fancies for chemistry as well. He used to immersed in the lab all day. In the end, he achieved gold medal in China Chemistry Olympics which helped him enter Peking University majoring in chemistry. Our parents play an important role in developing our interests which affect our career choices.
Moreover, you can start from where your parents are when you enter the job. Parents will give you advice to avoid the mistakes once they had made, so it would be easier for the children to do well in their jobs. They will also teach the children how to fulfill the requirements of the works or how to please the superiors, which will help their children get promoted and have a better salary easier.The experience of last generations will be the corner stone for the children.
Last but not least, you can meet many different people from your parents’ jobs. Their colleagues can help you get to know about the job multi-dimensionally. My mother works in China Academy of Science. Once she introduced me to a physicist who told me a lot about what academia were like and give me many advice in learning physics. He also taught me the academic status in different schools and introduced me some experts in the fields. With the helps of him, I prepared myself better when dealing with my academic works and make my goal clear. The familiars in the field can give the children guidance before and after they enter the career.
According to what we have discussed above, we can safely conclude that it is better for the children to choose the jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs. The interest, experiences and the connections inherited from their parents can help them shape a successful career.
- TPO-26: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to sup 70
- TPO-31- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to 76
- TPO-26: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to sup 70
- TPO-26: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to sup 70
- TPO-31- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the pastUse specific reasons and examples to 90
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82075471698 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65111125501 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.620421517 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383630752753 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115453820418 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117036486426 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251874706388 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858933362537 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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