Accordinng to personal experience, emotional concern and personality type people have different opinion about the statement some belive to choose similiar job as parent's some may differ. personally I prefer to job having similar to parent's.my propensity toward this is for several reasons few of which i would like to illustrate as follows.
To begin with, having similar job like parent's children's can get help in there career.for instance, I take my self as example my father was an mechanical engenieer and i choose the same profession, when ever I need help in my field projects I turn towards him for assistance.He was willing to help me any time without any arguments.also nowadays professional education is very expensive tuitions fee is much higher ordinary person can't afford that,parents can guide there childrens and save a lot of money those spend on extra tuition.
In addition to get assistance in career ,choosing similar professions inhance strong bound btween families. Nowadays children have no time for families due to lot of school work and assignmnents result in lack of communication with famile members for instance, we can have lot subjects to discussions when we have similar kind of intrest,we can debate on study related topics and spend much of time with parents which enable us to communicate and stronger our relations.
In conclusion,adapting similar profession provides childrens an oppertuni to get help in careers, also built relations strongers among families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.303501945525 0.229887763892 132% => OK
Verbs: 0.171206225681 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101167315175 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0233463035019 0.046263068375 50% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0544747081712 0.0685040099705 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120622568093 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0272373540856 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05223977491 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466926070039 0.0309702414327 151% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0466926070039 0.0887237588012 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233463035019 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155642023346 0.0139019557991 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1501.0 2387.08602151 63% => OK
No of words: 238.0 408.028673835 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30672268908 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.48200974243 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.411764705882 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.323529411765 0.251872472559 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.239495798319 0.174417080927 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.172268907563 0.112833075102 153% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05223977491 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.524397521467 123% => OK
Word variations: 70.4769334808 59.2087087015 119% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6684587814 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 39.6666666667 20.5533526081 193% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 152.808976612 48.84282405 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.166666667 120.699889404 207% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.6666666667 20.5533526081 193% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.5 0.644075263715 233% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.54480286738 252% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 72.0196078431 45.7405998639 157% => OK
Elegance: 1.8125 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22598971027 0.300154397459 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123081852699 0.103427244359 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0536430266596 0.0752933317313 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.786530245181 0.497263757937 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.21602866542 0.151897553556 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126404042867 0.114077575197 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054789618623 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.215969001446 0.336927656856 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0330103142441 0.067059652881 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144069880061 0.210909579961 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700764812337 0.0618886996521 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.6433691756 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.