It is inevitable truth that parents, nowadays, are more involved in their offspring education than in past days. This, I suppose, may be due to following reasons.
Increase in parents awareness may be compelling reasons for the parents engagement in study of their children. For instance, most of the people, today, are educated and know the role of education for the rising of the career of their children. As a result, most of the parents, according to their capacity, try to provide best educational facilities to their children such as repudiated school, college, university. The national survey revealed by the Kathmandu post, popular newspaper of Nepal, shows that increase in the enrollment of children by 30%, than in past 2 decade. Further, survey also gives the justification of increased enrollment due to increase in parents education and awareness. In contrast, in the past, lack of education acts as a tool of impediment in involvement of parents for their contribution in children education. Because they believed making their children skilled in their family profession provide their offspring a happy life, uneducated people basically made their children to work with them, thus hindering them to education.
Increase in family status and facilities may be another ground. With the development of technology and increase in modernization, the quality of life of people are higher in modern era. Nowadays, people have high income and facilities so they can provide their children best education. To make their children smart, they paste various educational poster such as alphabetical letter or number poster in kids room, enroll them into Montessori classes before matriculating them to school. Parents provide additional tuition classes besides normal classes. But, in past, these facilities were scare and used only by a limited people. Furthermore, Parents, nowadays, provide some part of time to their children education. You can take example of me. My brother, when a home, is involved studying his son, and goes to visit school teacher to know about academic performance of his son. however, our mother was not so conscious of our study.
However, some may argue that due to busier life, parents are not engage in study of children but still I insist that involvement is higher recent days. Due to awareness, love towards their children, most parent, in recent times, focus on their children study for also a little time only. We can see many busier people such as politician, typhoon coming to school to know about their children performance, pleading teacher to provide excellent education to them.
Therefore, due to above mentioned reason I believe that the parent are involved more in children's education nowadays than in past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...eness may be compelling reasons for the parents engagement in study of their children. ...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...ts, according to their capacity, try to provide best educational facilities to their childre...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'decade' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'decades'.
Suggestion: decades
...ment of children by 30%, than in past 2 decade. Further, survey also gives the justifi...
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Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'children the best'.
Suggestion: children the best
...nd facilities so they can provide their children best education. To make their children smart...
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Line 5, column 560, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...on classes besides normal classes. But, in past, these facilities were scare and used o...
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Line 5, column 591, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'scared'.
Suggestion: scared
...es. But, in past, these facilities were scare and used only by a limited people. Furt...
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Line 5, column 882, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... about academic performance of his son. however, our mother was not so conscious of our...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'engaged'.
Suggestion: engaged
...hat due to busier life, parents are not engage in study of children but still I insist...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...re in childrens education nowadays than in past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, i suppose, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2327.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27664399093 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78256702227 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8808382256 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.173913043 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1739130435 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95652173913 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276376287583 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900050244337 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665514113116 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190737043817 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577546698412 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.