In today's modern world everyone of us hardly working for earn money which should be sufficient to run our life, when we are having comfortable money in our hand it easy to fulfil our daily basic needs. In each every sector people are earning lots of money from white collar job to blue collar job employee. But unfortunately the teacher are not getting handsome salary for their hard work in US, not only in US throughout that world it is same. So I would like to support the statements which says that the teacher must have very good salary in order to improve the educational quality. Here, I want explore certain points why we supposed to give handsome salary for teacher.
Firstly, motivation is very big role which determine the quality out put. For example I want to get more turnover from the company, then manager motivates the staff to work hard in order achieve that goal by giving more bonus and incentive. By doing so company can reach their target in within short period of time without any doubt. Like that in order improve the quality education, management must be motivated the teacher by rising their salary level. Even Bush did the same thing to improve the educational quality during 1990 presidency period like SAT which motivated the lots education sector and the teacher to get that reward.
Secondly, educational sectors are hold the noble place so for that value even if we are giving millions of dollars also negligible amount in front of their hard work. They are the one who create the scientist, politician, engineer, and philosopher and so on. So even giving more money in terms of salary still it is more worthy to improve the educational quality.
Thirdly, there so many difference or inequality in their salary system , for example my working in private school she gets 1000 Rupees as salary whereas on my friend she is working in the government school, she draws 50000 as salary for the same grade class. This discrimination should be eliminated are else it will end up negative impact like those who are getting salary like my wife, they may not much interest because of different salary wages for the same job. So that the educational quality also go down.
Finally, I want to conclude that to improve the education system into higher level or to the international level, the teacher and the other staff who working as non teaching staff like assistant teacher, lab assistant and others also must get good salary to provide the quality education.
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Essay evaluation report
everyone of us hardly working for earn money
everyone of us is hardly working for earning money
motivation is very big role which determine the quality
motivation is a very big role which determine the quality
Sentence: In each every sector people are earning lots of money from white collar job to blue collar job employee.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to each and every
management must be motivated the teacher by rising their salary level.
management must motivate the teachers by rising their salary level.
educational sectors are hold the noble place
educational sectors are holding the noble place
They are the one who create the scientist,
They are the ones who create the scientist,
Sentence: Like that in order improve the quality education, management must be motivated the teacher by rising their salary level.
Description: The fragment order improve the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace improve with verb, past tense
Sentence: Thirdly, there so many difference or inequality in their salary system , for example my working in private school she gets 1000 Rupees as salary whereas on my friend she is working in the government school, she draws 50000 as salary for the same grade class.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to example and my
Sentence: Finally, I want to conclude that to improve the education system into higher level or to the international level, the teacher and the other staff who working as non teaching staff like assistant teacher, lab assistant and others also must get good salary to provide the quality education.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to who and working
Sentence: In today's modern world everyone of us hardly working for earn money which should be sufficient to run our life, when we are having comfortable money in our hand it easy to fulfil our daily basic needs.
Error: fulfil Suggestion: fulfill
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
Read a good grammar book.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 429 350
No. of Characters: 2015 1500
No. of Different Words: 217 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.551 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.697 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.378 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.085 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.706 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.556 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion is very big role which determine the quality out put. For example I want to g...
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Line 4, column 302, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... can reach their target in within short period of time without any doubt. Like that in order i...
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Line 4, column 396, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mprove the quality education, management must be motivated the teacher by rising ...
^^^
Line 4, column 582, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lots'' or 'lot's'?
Suggestion: lots'; lot's
...ncy period like SAT which motivated the lots education sector and the teacher to get...
^^^^
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... dollars also negligible amount in front of their hard work. They are the one who...
^^
Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun difference seems to be countable; consider using: 'many differences'.
Suggestion: many differences
...ucational quality. Thirdly, there so many difference or inequality in their salary system ,...
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Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., there so many difference or inequality in their salary system , for example my ...
^^
Line 9, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ce or inequality in their salary system , for example my working in private schoo...
^^
Line 9, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he same grade class. This discrimination should be eliminated are else it will en...
^^
Line 9, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld be eliminated are else it will end up negative impact like those who are getti...
^^
Line 9, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ifferent salary wages for the same job. So that the educational quality also go down. ...
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Line 12, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ude that to improve the education system into higher level or to the internationa...
^^
Line 12, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ational level, the teacher and the other staff who working as non teaching staff ...
^^
Line 12, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ant and others also must get good salary to provide the quality education.
^^
Line 12, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lary to provide the quality education.
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'whereas', 'for example', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248394004283 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.143468950749 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100642398287 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0663811563169 0.046263068375 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0599571734475 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117773019272 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0364025695931 0.0351676179071 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46017934772 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321199143469 0.0309702414327 104% => OK
Particles: 0.00428265524625 0.00188951952338 227% => OK
Determiners: 0.0770877944325 0.0887237588012 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0192719486081 0.0209618222197 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192719486081 0.0139019557991 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2516.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 430.0 408.028673835 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8511627907 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33488372093 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223255813953 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132558139535 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0906976744186 0.112833075102 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46017934772 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520930232558 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 59.363176089 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 25.2941176471 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7790155957 48.84282405 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 120.699889404 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2941176471 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.6196990424 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.49206349206 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260058890975 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0964486154763 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0694270676748 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.58845538624 0.497263757937 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197913637929 0.151897553556 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11266611029 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733477167888 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.248195743402 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.117589425115 0.067059652881 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167396353899 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690395242954 0.0618886996521 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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