Working hours have always been one of the most controversial issues among people. Although some people are of the opinion that fewer work hours and more days of work is better, I firmly believe that it is far better to work longer hours for fewer days in a week. In what follows I will elaborate on my reasons to shed light on my response.
Firs and foremost, by working a long time each day one can accurately plan to finish one specific task, and this point results in one's self-satisfaction. As an architect, my personal experience validates these points. In our career we have to work on specific project for weeks and each project consists of some part which we should plan to do them in a due time; as a matter of fact in each day we have specific work to do and if we cannot succeed to do those task on that day, we get anxious because of our work. Therefore, we benefit a lot from longer workday hours.
The second reason is, we can efficiently rest in the rest of the week. It goes without saying that have proper resting time and getting relaxation plays a vital role in having a healthy life. We can use these off days to plan a joyful journey and use our vacation efficiently. For example, I, myself, am a professional hiker and every week I plan to visit somewhere wonderful around my country, and as you know, a hiking trip takes at least three days to finish. Had I not had four days off, I could have never traveled as a hiker. As a result, this type of work week provides me with an interesting lifestyle.
All the aforementioned above lead us to the conclusion that working longer hours a day and have fewer working days is more beneficial for many people. This is because we can better manage our workday and because we can use our off time efficiently and enjoy an awesome journey. I always suggest this type of working to my close friends to make them be satisfied in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, at least, for example, you know, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41076487252 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51842475071 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524079320113 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5151150125 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302743257406 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928733978286 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728729047382 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197430496213 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276079520177 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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