TPO 33
In fact, team work has turned into a controversial issue during recent years as far as decision centers have recruited expert in order to increase team work in societies especially educational place including universities and schools; actually, encouraging students to be in group is counted as a significant aim that managers are trying to achieve. Fulfillment projects in a team not only improve the quality of projects but also increases communication between students; besides, students share their information; in other words, knowledge of other students can be used in a team work. Generally, nowadays not only do teachers orient students to participate in groups but other places where are focusing on a purpose such as factories, offices and governments also have founded a special department in order to make decisions considering the comment of group members.
Actually. researchers have studied several methods to determine whether there is a relationship between team work and the amount of prosperity. They have published a valid result showed the evaluation scores of students who do projects in a group is much more that others who prefer to be sole; therefore, the most significant result of being in a group is success that can be gained by sharing ideas in order to having better performance.
Indeed, in such an isolated world where people prefer to be alone, doing work in a group contribute people to safe from diseases such as depression. A wide range of sickness including heart disease and mental disease come from lack of interaction; hence, by encouraging people to perform in teams, their communication is improved; moreover, it saves people from such diseases.
Albeit, there are many positive effect that prompt people to be in group; besides, although, people can prompt in group faster that individually, it is hard to ignore the fact that doing projects in group is so hard that many students would rather fulfil project lonely. In fact, each group has special rule that must be obeyed by members; furthermore, making decision with regarding to many diverse opinions and persuade members is difficult. Actually, that's the reason why some people inclined to doing work alone on projects.
All in all, one cannot neglect the fact that both teachers and students keen on being in group in order to gain the aim more quickly with better quality in an intimacy atmosphere. On the other hands, investigations show that the more participating in group, the more prosperity that can be achieved; thus, for better or worse society is oriented to be in team works; hence, people should be taught how to participate in a group friendly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Researchers
... comment of group members. Actually. researchers have studied several methods to determi...
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Line 7, column 455, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ersuade members is difficult. Actually, thats the reason why some people inclined to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in fact, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14252873563 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83554994779 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8369073627 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.416666667 100.406767564 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.25 20.6045352989 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.45110844103 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 11.7677419355 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 58.1214874552 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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