With the process of urbanization and industrialization, the high-pace of living, people usually need to do several things at the same time to ensure the effective. However, some people argue that they can not produce high-quality results when they doing so. From my perspective, I suppose that one can do several things altogether given a well-arrangement and good sense of responsibility.
To begin with, the determinant factor of achievement is one's effort rather than the number of things he is doing. A person who owns a strong sense of responsibility can handle several tough tasks at the same time. In contrast, if he isn't willing to make a good effort, his work will be ended uo in a mess even if only one task is given to him once. People who believe that one can never handle different things at the same time ignore the power if subjective initiative and human potential. Undoubtedly, we can not expect a person to handle thousands of thing during a short period, but it is possible for most of us to deal with several missions well in the meantime.
Furthermore, another crucial element that will influence one's work results is his ability to make comprehensive arrangements. It will become much easier for a man who can properly allocate his time to solve concurrent problems. Comprehensive consideration will contribute a lot to the good accomplishment of multiple simultaneous projects.
In a nutshell, it is feasible for us to do a couple of things together without spoiling and any of them. Provided a carefully arrange time schedual and a high sense of responsibility, most of us can cope with several tasks in the meanwhile.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...he determinant factor of achievement is ones effort rather than the number of things...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ks at the same time. In contrast, if he isnt willing to make a good effort, his work...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d effort, his work will be ended uo in a mess even if only one task is given to h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, i suppose, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94244604317 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17089952521 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3315365039 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189713334703 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737478725537 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764341220753 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121320195561 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10619680646 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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