TPO 37: Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In comparison to the past, nowadays the number of daily tasks that every individual has to accomplish has substantially increased. Hence, without any specific plan and specifying the priorities one would not be able to manage his/her time and do their responsibilities very well. In this regard, some people hold the view that as people are busy doing different tasks, they do a few things well. From my own perspective, this statement is true. Among several reasons which support my viewpoint, I will delve into two conspicuous ones in the following paragraphs.
The most prominent issue that one should consider is the fact that every day we have limited time and in order to do a task perfectly, we have to allocate more time and energy for it. As we are surrounded by lots of different tasks it is impossible to accomplish all of them perfectly. As a personal experience, 4 years ago I used to be a perfectionist and I believed that all things that I have to do should be flawless. After a while, my situation was terrible as I had lots of incomplete tasks I really felt overwhelmed and depressed. Hence, I decided to change my approach. I realized that there are some limitations that I do not have any control over them, one of them is time. Therefore it is not necessary to do all the tasks perfectly. If it is acceptable, that is enough. You have not to exert more energy on it. Otherwise, you would not be able to handle all your responsibilities.
Furthermore, we should not ignore the impacts of new technologies on our performances.
Every technological advancement has its own pros and cons. One of the obvious negative points of current technologies is that they are one of the main causes of distraction and prevent lots of people to fully concentrate on their work and therefore lower their efficiency. For instance, nowadays there are lots of social media like Telegram, Instagram, Facebook, and etc which have specific attractions for its users and tempt the users to constantly check out their accounts every few minutes or hour. Hence, during the work, people are constantly distracted by any notification from these applications and interrupt their work to check their new notification. As people have to do lots of tasks these constant interruptions prevent them from doing their best and presenting a flawless work.
For short I think it is reasonable to conclude that these days people do a few things well as they have to do lots of tasks and have limited time and also there are lots of distractions which take their time and prevent them to work efficiently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...control over them, one of them is time. Therefore it is not necessary to do all the tasks...
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Suggestion:
...f new technologies on our performances. Every technological advancement has its ...
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...ir best and presenting a flawless work. For short I think it is reasonable to co...
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...e and prevent them to work efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81614349776 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95716365926 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473094170404 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1260384182 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6363636364 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232721356054 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688918824957 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853673922652 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137486463227 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976189527283 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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