Some people believe that they can do several things in a same time with the best result but others know that if they do many things together they can't have a agreeable outcome. I believe people will not have acceptable result if they do thing together. Thus in this essay I will say about the reasons that why I chose this side.
First of all, I think busy people haven’t enough time to do their things. It’s clearly that if you don't put time on your job or your response, you can't do it well. Some people just want to show that they are capable to do so many thing in a certain time but in my mind they are wrong because it’s important to do a job best not several things not complete. For example last week I have do my home works and do dishes and doing my project for university in one night! and the result was that I didn't do my project well and couldn't get high score from my home works.
Secondly, It’s important to be concentrate on your job. For doing something well concentration can help to doing the thing easier and doing it effectively. For instants, when I was studying for my exam, I couldn't concentrate on studying and understanding so I had to put more time to find out my lesson.
Finally, I know that stress will put any body do his or her job. In my mind when people have stress they can't think well and plan on their job. For example in days that I have to study for my exams I have a lot of stress and I can't study well and sometimes I'm just crying because of stress so I lose my time and also can't understand my lessons fast.
To sum up, I believe that it’s important to have concentration on our job. Additionally, putting time and being clam during doing something can be effective to do our job best.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...at if they do many things together they cant have a agreeable outcome. I believe peo...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
... time on your job or your response, you cant do it well. Some people just want to sh...
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Suggestion: many things
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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... concentration on our job. Additionally, putting time and being clam during doing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, i think, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30930930931 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41324131482 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441441441441 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7882141728 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318283728577 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132138244417 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952210192519 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191798441004 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960287914701 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.