In this day and age of modernization, as it is commonly sensed, good leadership has become of paramount importance of a business success. In this vein, while different people have distinct idea toward the idea that leadership comes naturally, in my point of view, leadership is not nessecerly something that a person be borne by that and can be learned through training and learning. Throughout the following paragraphs, among the most predominant reasons in support of this contention heightening the accuracy and becoming aware of alternative ideas will be meticulously scrutinized to advocate my standpoint.
To commence with, the first exquisite point which should be mentioned here is that although there are leaders that can say they are born to be a leader, still there are many cases that people learned how to be a good leader and they actually successful in leading. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has elaborated above. One of university professors stated that when he at first started to study of management, he did not know anything about leadership and he was not successful in his career, but after graduation, through studding and experiencing a lot of challenging situations, he learned how he should direct and lead his team.
Another equally worth mentioning point in corroborating this issue is that if leadership was something that comes only naturally, there were not lots of courses which encourage people to take part and learn how to leader. leadership, like other skills, has some primary principals to learn that are nessecery in other to be a powerful and effective leader.
The other subtle point worth mentioning is that in order to be a successful leader, you need to deploy proper strategies, and this is not something to be born with. Giving and using strategies that are the best for different situations, need years of experiencing similar situations and having the knowledge about the related scope which can be politic, sport, war etc.
To recapitulate, taking all aforementioned reasons into account, it could be authentically concluded that from my vantage point, although people with some special characteristics can become a more successful leader in some cases, but it leadership can be learned since leadership is something that needs mentoring, knowing the knowledge and experiencing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Leadership
...e to take part and learn how to leader. leadership, like other skills, has some primary pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, still, then, while, of course, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21578947368 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00316545833 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5730170495 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.181818182 100.406767564 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5454545455 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227232578144 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922827487003 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390066059211 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131800729383 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0088099970149 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 11.7677419355 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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