tpo 41
Personally, I believe that teachers had more prestige and honor in the society in the past than they were in present day. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, learning resourses in the past were fewer than the resourses in present day. This fact represented that the knowledge of teachers was the scarce resouce and let teachers become pretty precious in that time.
My parents' experience is a compelling example of this. When they were young, goning to school was the only way for them to learn knowledge. Teachers at that time usually had lots of power to command student and punish them without accused by the parents of the students. Besides, teachers also earned much honor in society.
Secondly, the position in national govenment system, like teacher, was regard as high level jobs. In the past, getting the position in goverment meant that your future life would be bright and predominant. For instance, in the ancient china, it was normal for a town to celebrate that there is a person from this town been nominated by the goverment. This person would get lots of presents from whole town and be congraduated by all the person he met. In addition, his family would be honored as well. To sum up, getting a job in government was excellent in the past.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that teachers were more prestigous in the past. This is because the few resourses in the past and the honor of the position in the government.
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- TPO 40 Integrated Writing Task 70
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use specific reasons and examples to su 86
- PO 46 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people Use specific reasons and exam 60
- TPO 43 Independent Writing TaskImagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do Interrupt and correct the mistake right away Wai 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. ...
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Line 8, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inion that teachers were more prestigous in the past. This is because the few res...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70075757576 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51227187745 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537878787879 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1413841166 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5625 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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