TPO-41 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Education is a big part of children growing lifestyle. Governments invest in educating, schools, and teachers more and more. Teachers have an essential role in teaching. Teachers train the next generation of the country and make them useful for society. They built the basis of the future. I disagree with this statement that they were more valuable in the past. I believe parents, students, and governments value them. There is a lot of reasons for this claim, which two of them, which have great importance elaborate hereunder.
First, nowadays, teachers should teach more subjects than in the past. The students' schedule is full of exciting topics, such as creativity and music, that help students find their favorite ones. As a result, teachers have to master in more areas and be patient to interest the pupils. So, governments should spend more money on teachers to guaranty: firstly, the teachers feel valuable in society and, second, they can spend their whole time only getting the skills are essential for teaching. For instance, in my country, governments prepare great options for teachers to buy houses, cars, and using the sportive option.
Moreover, teachers are friendlier than before. They are kind, patient, and have excellent connection skills. So, they can easily communicate with students. Therefore, they are loved more than the past, and students respect them a lot. Parents are aware of this relationship and appreciate it. For example, my friend's daughter goes to an elementary school and adores her teacher. When she comes back home from school, she describes excellent moments about the learning process and is eager about the next day. My friend always feels happy about the teacher and valued her so much. She says that today students learn deeper, and the parents need to spend less time training them at home.
To sum up, teachers are essential for society and the future. They can change the destiny of children and make a tremendous and successful generation. In my option, people respect teachers more than ever. Because they teach more fields to students and gain better skills, that's why governments spend more on them, and they are friendly with students and feel comfortable during the learning process and bring the respect up between both students and parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1329787234 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49324006845 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0965869697 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2307692308 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26923076923 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228555889598 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716318364013 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649843068455 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152127323737 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302035138084 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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