Teachers are the people who open the doors of life to us, and they still influence us most of all irrespective the fact that the world has changed significantly during the last decades. In this regard, personally, I am prone to believe that teachers are valued nowadays as much as they were in the past. I hold this opinion since we still learn more from them than from other people; and knowledge continues to remain as one of the most precious acquirements of the mankind.
To begin with, little has changed until now in the role of teachers in our society, and they are still the ones who help us explore the world the most. We study from our childhood to adulthood and gain knowledge and skills which are essential for both our professional and private life. Without getting educated we are not full members of a society based on the development of technology and merely all its spheres. That is why people who teach us are the most important ones, and, often, they are our role models. For instance, when I was young I was trying to copy the thoughts and behavior of my history teacher whose professionalism was astonishing. He was able to present any material in coherent and understandable manner, and he shaped in me love towards history. This kind of people will be always valued appropriately.
Additionally, without knowledge we can do little in our changing life and, therefore, we appreciate knowledge and knowledgeable people very much. This is explained by the fact that modern life is complicated and in order to succeed in any sphere one should be very intelligent. Furthermore, more strict requirements are being imposed on the level of intelligence since the competition among people becomes stronger. For example, I am a lawyer and I do realize that without getting education I would not be able to learn my living or to compete with others in the job market which becomes harsher and harsher. This, in turn, makes us very attentive to our tutors, professors as they are the ones who facilitate the process of our learning. In other words, the importance of knowledge determines our attitude towards our tutors.
To sum up briefly, we will always appreciate our teachers. Its explanation is twofold: first, because teachers open our eyes, and, second, since knowledge itself is a constant value.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 399, Rule ID: CONTINUE_TO_REMAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'remains'.
Suggestion: remains
...m than from other people; and knowledge continues to remain as one of the most precious acquirement...
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Line 2, column 791, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will always be
...ve towards history. This kind of people will be always valued appropriately. Additionally, wi...
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Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e knowledge itself is a constant value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86616161616 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79744529592 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8271312462 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.055555556 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123659010232 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417748863812 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397698626912 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821819850325 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422020773676 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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