Some people believe that teachers have a better situation in the past and other people think that nowadays teacher find their valuable position. Actually, in my opinion, there is no doubt in the idea of the second group. Teachers are provided with more convenient, high salary and assistance of parents. This kind of changes make their situation better and people admit their important effects in the future of a country.
First, due to the improvement of technology and advent of new devices, the administration of schools bring teacher more amenities. Most of the teachers have lecture-based classes and they use high-tech facilities to the presentation. For example, when I went school my teachers had to use blackboard and it was awful. But today because of the new devices everything become easier for teachers.
Teaching is one of the most difficult jobs in the world. Teachers are struggling students most of the time and have to control them. Unfortunately, in the past schools had a very low budget so teachers did not satisfy. Since today government designates more budget to schools and as a result the salary of teachers is raised.
Finally, in the past, parents did not concern about the education of their children. Their thought that studying is not vital for children so teachers could not use the help of parents. Today, unlike the past, parents involve with the educational process of their children. It is a very good point for teachers because their workloads are lightened. Teachers always keep in touch with parents teach them how to encourage children to work harder.
To sum up, in spite of some people's idea, I think that teachers have a worthwhile situation today. Since they have a critical role in every country, need more motivations such as more facilities, high wage to work better. Fortunately, nowadays they reach most of these motivations.
- TPO-33 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.Use spe 84
- TPO-40 - Independent Writing Task Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-28 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 65
- TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when the 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lectured'.
Suggestion: lectured
...re amenities. Most of the teachers have lecture based classes and they use high tech fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, second, so, while, for example, i think, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05732484076 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67436293881 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528662420382 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.3977677459 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121688319133 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040750316024 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027496994981 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723484126186 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00403666881172 0.0645574589148 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
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Rates: 70.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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