Although, some people may believe that, teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past, I disagree with that, because today being educated has become very important for people. Also, teachers have a significant role in preparing children for the future life. Besides, advancements in technology have made the need of teachers more crucial.
In recent years, technology has progressed rapidly, which in turn has lots of changes in people's lives. Today, people do their jobs through the internet. Having cellphone and computer has become regular for them and living without them is nearly impossible. So, if they want to use these technologies, they need to know how to work with them. Also, most companies have expanded their business through the internet and made a competition atmosphere with other companies, and it would be a great job opportunity for someone, who has academic educations to hire. Thus, I believe that, being educated has become more important for people and as a result, teachers have high position in society.
In addition, In the past, it was the family's task to prepare children for their responsibilities in the future. Whereas today, as the technology advances and the living conditions become more complicated, the need for working has become obvious. In some families, both parents have to work to make money for foods and clothes. Therefore, they don't have enough time to spend with their kids in order to make them ready for their future life. I believe that, preparing children for the future life is one of the most significant tasks of schools. Thus, from my perspective, teachers now are more appreciated and valued by people.
As I discussed, with advancing in technology, the world is changing rapidly and using the time efficiently has become more important. For example, many companies use the internet in order to advertise their products and attract more costumers. Now imagine that, one of these companies is going to encounter with hardware or software issues. It needs to fix the problems right away, if it wants to remain in the competition with other companies. Thus, the need for teachers has become more important, because they would train the future technicians.
In conclusion, I believe that, as the time passes and technology advances, teachers have become more important for the society, because unlike the past, it is very important for people to be literate. Moreover, since today parents have not enough time to spend with their children and prepare them for their responsibilities in the future, it would be teachers task to make them ready. Furthermore, as the technology devices become widespread throughout the world, the need of teachers for training qualified technicians become more crucial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17333333333 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75266515074 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442222222222 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 732.6 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5284959511 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.217391304 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5652173913 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134226962236 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050286882271 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430852705483 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100663189995 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395467842943 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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