I agree with the statement, because planning enables students to study better. In addition, having a plan makes businessmen to be successful managers. Moreover, making a plan helps people to use their natural resources more efficient.
Having a plan enables students to study better. Nowadays, students have to study very hard and pass their courses with the good grades in order to find a good job with a good salary. I believe that having a plan will enforce students to work hard in order to obtain their goals. Thus, it is essential for them to have a plan.
In addition, planning are essential for businessmen to be successful managers. They act like a brain for a company. Since they always take important decisions, it is essential for them to have plans. Having a plan will enable managers to be aware of new findings in technology and use them in order to push the company toward its goals. For example, planning expresses how the manager wants to use resources in order to improve productivity and increase its profits.
In addition, planning makes people to use resources better. Nowadays, our natural resources are limited and this fact will make us to use them more efficient. For example, it has recently announced that most countries will struggle with water shortages in the near future. This crisis will enforce goverments and people to make a plan about how is better to use of water resources.
In conclusion, Nowadays planning is important for all range of people. Students need to have a plan in order to obtain their goals. Businessmen should have a plan if they want to be a successful manager. Besides, goverments need a plan in order to use their natural resources more efficiently.
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 73
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 60
- Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. 73
- Which one do you think is the most important for high school teacher (age from 15 to 18)?1.The ability to give students advice to plan for their future2.The ability to find which students need help and provide them with help3.The ability to encourage stud 73
- TPO-34 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.U 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 383, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ow is better to use of water resources. In conclusion, Nowadays planning is impo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231481481481 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.194444444444 0.158761421928 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0771604938272 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037037037037 0.046263068375 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0648148148148 0.0685040099705 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108024691358 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0308641975309 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68247343439 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.070987654321 0.0309702414327 229% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.070987654321 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185185185185 0.0209618222197 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00617283950617 0.0139019557991 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1712.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 291.0 408.028673835 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88316151203 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350515463918 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.278350515464 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209621993127 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134020618557 0.112833075102 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68247343439 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426116838488 0.524397521467 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.5020222432 59.2087087015 68% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.55 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2278231538 48.84282405 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 120.699889404 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.55 20.5533526081 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.644075263715 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 42.3850515464 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.25 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315649860977 0.300154397459 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117216397658 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.06915587417 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533322328173 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119315829829 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134076312356 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684350427403 0.0781384742642 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365898796496 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.036446263117 0.067059652881 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224455181407 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03235049726 0.0618886996521 52% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.