Nowadays, in many countries teacjing is one of the most important job in society. In some countries teacher have more prestige than others.Major of people in asian countries think htat a teacher is not satisfactory job because of its low income. In my point of view teachers' respection depends on the countries requirements during the ages and other thing like population.
To begin with, In countries that are in way of developing teachers are not vital member of society instead employees are more efficient elements. Moreover poor countries first they need to provide food and shelter for their citizens. But, in developed countries like Germany teachers are the most critical member of the society and they earn more money than a doctor because of thinking that state teachers raise students to become expert doctors in future anf if tey refuse to teach well to them, they wont have a pleasant future.
However, in some case we can accept the claim that teacher had better position in society in past. Rise of population and rise of request for teaching jobs make a more competitive situation for teachers.
in past there were fewer people that could teach, so they were more in attention and had more income.
Today, in some country, society refuse to hire more teacher and prefers to use old teacher instead.
Consequently, based on factors like societies requerement and population the position and respect of teachers can be varied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 240.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60922508718 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9957251203 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.545454545 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186122061301 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754388639103 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439661517732 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102315350846 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374356998214 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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