Although having many different types of tasks for employees can be beneficial for them, its disadvantageous can overweight its advantageous. Workers become fatigued soon, make a lot of mistakes, and also miss the opportunity of being with their families. Therefore, workers are more satisfied when they do similar tasks all day long.
Having many types of tasks make employees tired soon. When someone has a lot duties in a company, he tolerates a lot of pressure and stress, because of his responsibilities. His mental and physical activities increase and as a result, he become tired soon in workplace. Thus, people are more satisfied when they have similar tasks in workplace.
They may make a lot of mistakes. When someone has many tasks to do, he gets tired soon. Consequently, he likely makes many errors and lose his job. Last year, I was working in a company as its accountant and I usually had a lot of tasks. One day, since I was very tired, I forgot to check the bills and this mistake serious problem for the company.
Having many tasks destroys family connections. Workers who has a lot of types of duties in the company must work until midnight and do their works. When they come home, kids usually are sleeping and the man is so tired to talk with his wife. Hence, working on many different types of tasks may destroy the family relations.
Although many people think that worker are more happy when they have many tasks to do during the workday, I strongly disagree, because they tolerate more pressure and do more physical activities that make them tired and consequently, they make a lot of mistakes. Besides, having different tasks may destroy the family relations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Although having many different types of tasks for employees can be ben...
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Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...o talk with his wife. Hence, working on many different types of tasks may destroy the family r...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'consequently', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233128834356 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.168711656442 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0889570552147 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.058282208589 0.046263068375 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0828220858896 0.0685040099705 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101226993865 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0337423312883 0.0351676179071 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67584367371 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0122699386503 0.0309702414327 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0613496932515 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0184049079755 0.0209618222197 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0245398773006 0.0139019557991 177% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1685.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 289.0 408.028673835 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83044982699 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318339100346 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23875432526 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162629757785 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103806228374 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67584367371 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474048442907 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.789829996 59.2087087015 77% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0555555556 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3953876489 48.84282405 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6111111111 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.644075263715 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 39.9309880815 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.18811881188 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42914973107 0.300154397459 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0647669644388 0.103427244359 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0518734523659 0.0752933317313 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471594195589 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142364252938 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159838505017 0.114077575197 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116574836401 0.0781384742642 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.348512271572 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0453313098546 0.067059652881 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291077074007 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592619277548 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.86379928315 336% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.4623655914 406% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.