Workers have variety types of work styles and methods that preffered to do, during their workday. İn my opinion doing different types of work is more useful and fun than doing similar tasks during the all day. İ have several reasons for this opinion.
To begin with, doing different types of work in workday is a usefull. İt means that workers doing diverse work can learn more new knowlange and gather a lot of experiance . My own example can match to this point. For example last year İ was working in a privet asfalt factory for 2 month. İ have worked in different departments Such as; Bank and Finance, reservator and so on. Therefore, İ learn huge diverse work experiences that will help me in the feature to my carrer. That is why İ prefer this opinion.
İn addition, it is more fun doing different tasks doring workday. Many people just satisfy and enjoy transfering from one work to another when finish previous work. For inctance, People doing heavy works can move to easy work to take breaks and refresh themselves. Moreover, if their work is too boring, they can just to add some different Works and satisfy by their work. So that, workers hve to do different tasks to enjoy their work.
İn conclution, Workers doring their workday have to do different tasks and methods to satisfy themselvs. Different task will be more usefull and fun for workers. That is why İ think ths way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70731707317 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34110340075 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532520325203 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4373022645 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.3333333333 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306339453189 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114852452916 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107971431868 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230118161177 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924797634196 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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