TPO 45- independent writing taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use s
In fact, the considerable change in children's behavior which is obvious nowadays has turned into a controversial issue during recent years which has obliged many policy-makers to pay more attention. Although some people, if were asked, would deny the fact that kids have become more autonomous, others believe being independent is counted as a serious change that can easily be identified. I extremely reinforce the mentioned statement which declares the idea that the youth make decisions individually. In other words, they don't follow their parents' hints as well as past generations. There are many proofs that verify the causes of this change among which the technological world stand first.
Actually, in such a modern world, people; whether old or younger, prefer to use internet or social media in order to be aware of global events instead of using their parents' experiences and information because not only is the information which can be gained on the internet, comprehensive enough but also access to it isn't arduous. Therefore, the youngsters would rather be announced by using websites and virtual platforms which contribute them to be more independent.
Indeed, the method of training has been completely changed. psychologists encourage both parents and teachers to teach children to be more independent; whereas, the prior generation had learned to follow the parents' rules. Actually, the strategy used extremely affects the child's behavior. the older methods, the more dependent people who just follow others' thought in society.
Albeit; as expressed above, a vast majority of young people carry out the task by themselves, some children overtly depend on their parents. For instance, my student was so clever that be admitted in the Harvard university -one of the high-level university in the world. He didn't enroll because of her dependence. In addition, she could make decisions by the others' clues.
All in all, one cannot neglect the fact that the temper of a wide range of young people has considerably changed. they enable to choose their ways; furthermore, the absolutely autonomous because of the novel suggested methods for educating and the huge available data which is shared on the internet that helps people to be self-contained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, in fact, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35097493036 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84659768505 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629526462396 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1880398959 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174182654062 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555256899207 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535347066064 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966452187696 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039715086907 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.