There has been a constant drumbeat that current generations are more independent compared to the previous generations. Personally, I agree with the statement and I will elaborate my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
Admittedly, some might hold the point that young people rely on their parents to make decisions for them especially when it comes to their profession. However, pursuing a career is a significant decision to decide, not only associate with self-interest but also needs to include financial factors. In order to have a comprehensive conclusion, discussing with people who are experienced and familiar with our own characteristics seems to be a reasonable process.
In addition, marriage depends on two people's decision instate of the parents. In ancient society, an individual usually has little control over their own marriage and parents tended to choose someone with equal family background. On the other hand, with the awareness of free will and people being more well educated, parents' influence decreased dramatically when it comes to marriage. For instance, my grandparent's marriage was decided by their parents. Before the night they engaged, both of them had never seen each other before not to mention loved each other. Needless to say, similar circumstances would never happen in present society.
Moreover, parents start to change to way they educate children, encourage them to learn from the process, and prevent it from happening again. The traditional way of thinking changed dramatically, parents raise offspring with freedom and encouragement instead of the iron fist. To illustrate, in early 2019, Oxford University published an investigation about the association between the way parents educate children and the index of the parent's educational background, with higher education, parents tend to believe children as an individual people and with welling to communicate with them rather than command them, giving a direct decision.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that the current generation is more independent compared to the previous generation. Because when it comes to important decisions to determine, the youngster will always contribute to the process and make selfs own decision.
- TPO 33 Integrated Writing Task 65
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TPO 44 Independent Writing Task Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports Others believe that it is best to use that time doing th 76
- TPO11 Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information Others think access to much information creates problems Which view do you agree with Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TPO 38 integrated writing task 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eoples decision instate of the parents. In ancient society, an individual usually ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54597701149 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00239368106 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9315745612 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246158682432 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769396166651 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961567719593 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122311750889 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936088853481 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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