Independency is a key in everyone's life. This attribute can help people do their jobs own to their own, even in the absence of their family. Some people believe that today's youngsters are more independent that the people the past time while the others disagree. From my point of view, I deeply believe that people in today's life are more independent than the past and in what follows I will attempt to address the most discernible reasons.
First, the fast growth of technology heightened independency mood among young people. Accordingly, they have more alternative than the past time for seeing different options. Actually new shopping mall, Internet and free discussion room are good facilitator for independency. For example, the time that I was ten years old, if I wanted to buy a new thing the person who must gave the opinion was my mother, however today I can search all the option on the internet and chose the best one. Therefore, emergence of internet helps people to be on their own.
In addition, young people at this time are more knowledgeable than their old time. Regarding this, the youth usually go to the universities and study different major to be expert on and this opportunity give them good experience in their independency, in a way that they decide by themselves. My brother career in the university is a good example of this; He always told me about some obligatory courses in university that force them to choose best marketing system or option. According to this courses, he could decide and chose better based on his knowledge. So, that experience taught me that university in modern era facilitate decision option through different teaching methods.
Finally, there are multiplicity of counselors in schools and universities that help people to decide independently. Actually, they help youngsters according to their experiences or the courses that they have been taught. For instant, last night I saw a documentary about people decision- making. The program was about a counselor life which help young people in different way. At the end of the story, it has been demonstrated that counselor can give plenty of solution to people in the time that encounter difficulties. So, as it is it clear, new counselor can help the youth so much.
All in all, as the aforementioned examples have illustrated young people in today’s life have more independency that their counterpart in past time. Not only new life's technology like internet help them to decide on their own, but also they are more knowledgeable and there are more counsellors which enable decision- making procedure much easier for them.
- life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children. 70
- TPO 48- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 50
- Integrated TPO 42 75
- TPO 49- Independent writingDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. 60
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85136877154 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503432494279 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0905172398 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.363636364 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8636363636 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273389023084 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833845789145 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614224477546 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166387108217 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542728019679 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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